What do you think of my poem?
Jan 10, 2010
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Tornado Pictures Video
The shrill shrieks of hollow laughter echo throughout
While images spin through a pulsing body,
And each breathe steals another piece of the core.
Eyes made black from streaming lakes,
And void smiles fill the air,
Fading into the abyss as quickly as they once arrived.
Swirling tornadoes come down to earth
To swoop up a lost soul
Leaving behind the vacancy and taking back the reserved.
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One comment
Kevin on January 10, 2010 at 11:33 pm
I like it. Good vocabulary. I can feel the emotion. I too love writing poems. It helps me express myself.